Strengthening Writing with Peer Feedback

With guidance and support from adults, respond to questions and suggestions from peers and add details to strengthen writing as needed.

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Standard: K.W.5 – With guidance and support from adults, respond to questions and suggestions from peers and add details to strengthen writing as needed.

Grade level: Kindergarten

Subject: English Language Arts

Domain: Writing

Teacher Overview

This standard emphasizes the importance of collaborative learning in writing. By responding to questions and suggestions from peers and adults, kindergarteners learn to add details and improve their writing. This standard is crucial for developing early writing skills and fostering a positive attitude towards feedback and revision. Students should be able to express their ideas through simple sentences or drawings and be comfortable sharing their work. They should understand basic storytelling elements and be open to discussing their work with others.

After mastering this standard, students will be able to independently revise their work and understand the value of feedback. They will be better prepared for more complex writing tasks in higher grades.

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Common Misconception 1

Some students may believe that their initial writing is perfect and does not require any changes. This misconception can hinder their willingness to revise and improve their work.

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Intervention 1

Use examples of well-known stories that went through multiple drafts. Praise students’ efforts and improvements to encourage a growth mindset.

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Common Misconception 2

Students might view feedback as negative criticism, which can make them reluctant to participate in revision activities.

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Intervention 2

Model positive feedback sessions and emphasize that feedback is meant to help them grow. Use role-playing activities to practice giving and receiving constructive feedback.

Prerequisite Knowledge

Students should have basic familiarity with expressing ideas through drawing and simple sentences, and be comfortable sharing their work with peers and adults.

Subsequent Knowledge

Students will develop the ability to independently revise and edit their writing, understand the value of constructive feedback, and apply these skills to more complex writing tasks.

Instructional Activities

  • Peer review sessions where students share their drawings or sentences and ask questions.
  • Group storytelling activities where each student adds a detail to the story based on peer suggestions.
  • Teacher-led revision workshops focusing on adding details to improve clarity and interest.

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